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Coming to Hale: Hale Series Book 1 Kindle Edition

4.3 out of 5 stars 398 ratings

The only time she trusted someone with her heart, she was just a girl; he betrayed her and left her humiliated. Since then, Lorali Bennett has let that moment in time dictate her life.

Ian Hale, sexy as sin business mogul, has never had more than a passing interest in any particular woman, until a chance encounter with Lorali, leaves a lasting mark on him.

Their fast paced romance is one for the record books, but what will happen when Ian’s secrets come to light? Especially when those secrets will cost her everything she spent years trying to rebuild.

This is a standalone contemporary novel. The next book in the Hale series is Alexa and Garrett’s story: Begging for Hale.

Recommended for readers 18 and up due to strong language and explicit sexual content.
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  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B00XDAHEZ8
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ (May 29, 2015)
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ May 29, 2015
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 1.8 MB
  • Text-to-Speech ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Screen Reader ‏ : ‎ Supported
  • Enhanced typesetting ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • X-Ray ‏ : ‎ Not Enabled
  • Word Wise ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 245 pages
  • Customer Reviews:
    4.3 out of 5 stars 398 ratings

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Marie James
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Marie James: I'm a full-time author, mother of two boys, and wife of 18+ years. Dog Mom to four great danes: Maximus, Sassy, Kiki, and Hagrid

I've spent almost my entire lifetime living in central Texas, with only short stays in South Carolina, Alabama, and Florida. Currently residing in a sleepy little town in East Tennessee.

Writing is my passion, and I absolutely love being able to sit down and put all of my thoughts and emotions into my stories.

I love dogs, coffee, making handmade cards, and reading steamy romance novels!

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Customers find the book engaging, with one mentioning it kept them hooked from the beginning. The story is immersive and well-written, featuring great characters and plenty of steamy scenes. Customers describe the romance as sexy and fun to read, with one customer particularly enjoying watching Ian seduce Lorali. The book receives positive feedback for its pacing, with one customer noting its rich background.

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18 customers mention "Readability"18 positive0 negative

Customers find the book an amazing read, with one mentioning they were hooked from the beginning.

"...This book is happy, and funny with Lorali not wanting to give Ian the time of day, and him having to really work at getting Lorali to notice him...." Read more

"...It's definitely worth the read and I will read the next one in this series :-)" Read more

"...This book had me hooked from the beginning! James has created a host of lovable, complex characters that you can't help but love...." Read more

"...Overall I’d say this book wasn’t bad. There is definitely room for improvement, but the bones of the story were there...." Read more

12 customers mention "Story quality"12 positive0 negative

Customers enjoy the story quality of the book, finding it great and immersive, with one customer noting its suspenseful elements.

"...This book was just a joy to sit down and read and immerse yourself into the story...." Read more

"...Well, I liked reading it. Great loving story with a good background...." Read more

"...There were some really great scenes in this book that gave me confidence that Marie James is coming into her own as a writer and I will definitely..." Read more

"...Besides being steamy, this books has some suspense and mystery in it and it's a perfect combination. I definitely recommend this series!..." Read more

9 customers mention "Character development"7 positive2 negative

Customers appreciate the character development in the book.

"...This book was well written and the characters were well defined and had lots of back ground with each other...." Read more

"...Still felt like something was missing, so gave it 4 stars but I liked the characters...." Read more

"...James has created a host of lovable, complex characters that you can't help but love...." Read more

"...It was fun to watch him seduce Lorali. Now the character Lorali was just irritating...." Read more

9 customers mention "Heat level"9 positive0 negative

Customers enjoy the heat level of the book, describing it as super hot with steamy scenes.

"...attraction was electric and their sex was “fan yourself while reading” hot...." Read more

"...Maybe some drama long with it. There were a lot of steamy scenes, and they were written really well!..." Read more

"...This book is hot from the word go....i read it in one sitting. The chemistry between these two is off the charts!..." Read more

"What an amazing read! Hale is hot as well! Can't wait for book 2! Ian is panty dripping sex on a stick amazing...." Read more

9 customers mention "Love"9 positive0 negative

Customers love the book, finding it sexy and yummy, with one customer describing Ian as delicious.

"...So starts her social whirl. She is a beautiful woman who had a rough time after her boyfriend got arrested for selling drugs...." Read more

"...James has created a host of lovable, complex characters that you can't help but love...." Read more

"...Ian is rich and mysterious and playful and gorgeous. But he's also sweet, funny, and smart! Can She trust him with her heart? Why does he want her?..." Read more

"...Sex, emotional, love, pov's, great storyline just a great read.." Read more

5 customers mention "Writing quality"5 positive0 negative

Customers find the writing quality of the book well-executed, with one customer noting that the author really nailed it.

"...This book was well written and the characters were well defined and had lots of back ground with each other...." Read more

"...The thing that the author really nailed, however, was the chemistry between Ian and Lorali...." Read more

"...There were a lot of steamy scenes, and they were written really well! Definitely didn't leave out any of the dirty details!..." Read more

"I thought the description sounded good. I really did. But to be blunt, the story was awful...." Read more

4 customers mention "Fun to read"4 positive0 negative

Customers find the book fun to read, describing it as funny, with one customer particularly enjoying watching the main character seduce Lorali.

"...This book is happy, and funny with Lorali not wanting to give Ian the time of day, and him having to really work at getting Lorali to notice him...." Read more

"...He knew seduction. It was fun to watch him seduce Lorali. Now the character Lorali was just irritating...." Read more

"...Ian is rich and mysterious and playful and gorgeous. But he's also sweet, funny, and smart! Can She trust him with her heart? Why does he want her?..." Read more

"I have to say very Hot,Sexy,Funny and fabulous story with awesome characters definitely looking forward to the rest this series." Read more

4 customers mention "Pacing"4 positive0 negative

Customers appreciate the pacing of the book, with individual reviews noting its well-imagined narrative, good background, and rich storytelling.

"...Well, I liked reading it. Great loving story with a good background...." Read more

"...One scene in particular was fabulously done and very well imagined and still has me hot and bothered weeks after reading it..." Read more

"...The chemistry between these two is off the charts! Ian is rich and mysterious and playful and gorgeous. But he's also sweet, funny, and smart!..." Read more

"...Sex, emotional, love, pov's, great storyline just a great read.." Read more

Top reviews from the United States

  • Reviewed in the United States on October 9, 2015
    Lorali Bennett is a reporter for a Denver paper in the Lifestyle section after a move up from the obituary section. The lifestyle social reporter goes to all the charity events and high society things. So starts her social whirl. She is a beautiful woman who had a rough time after her boyfriend got arrested for selling drugs. She dumped him and is not looing for a man even years after high school and college. Ian Hale is is a billionaire that is too good too good lookig for his own good. He never sleeps with a woman more than once and is tired and bored with women who only want him for his social standing or his bank ballance. He is an all around good guy but doesn't spend time with many women or let them get to know him.
    This storylin is lke a lot of stories, but that is where the similarities end. This book is happy, and funny with Lorali not wanting to give Ian the time of day, and him having to really work at getting Lorali to notice him. Something that has never happened to him in his life, which makes him all the more interested in her. There were some really funny laugh out loud moments in this book, not to mention lots of really hot sex after Lorali and Ian got to know each other a little bit.
    This book was well written and the characters were well defined and had lots of back ground with each other. I was surprised when I learned this was the authors first book. I've read books of authors with alot more books under their belts that weren't near as detailed, or the storyline near as put together, that really takes a lot of thought to get the characters and the story to flow so smoothly! This book was just a joy to sit down and read and immerse yourself into the story. The characters talked to each other like friends do and you could really see them having all the laughs and all the things going on in their lives that went on in this book. I have already bought the next book in the series and can't wait to dig into it. I believe this author is one to keep your eye on and that she is going to write many good books.
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  • Reviewed in the United States on August 3, 2015
    I haven't read a book from this author yet and it was recommended to me. Well, I liked reading it. Great loving story with a good background. Still felt like something was missing, so gave it 4 stars but I liked the characters. It's definitely worth the read and I will read the next one in this series :-)
  • Reviewed in the United States on December 30, 2016
    Holy Hotness!!! I have a new love and his name is Ian Hale!!!!
    This book had me hooked from the beginning! James has created a host of lovable, complex characters that you can't help but love. I fell hard and fast for the dirty talking yet romantic Ian.
    When Ian and Loreli literally ran into each other I knew their story would be good. What I didn't expect was it to grab ahold of me and not let go until the end. I read this book in sitting and was sad to see it end. I will be reading the next in this series immediately! I am absolutely hooked!!
  • Reviewed in the United States on August 27, 2015
    After seeing a lot of positive feedback for this debut novel, I couldn’t help but one-click this bad boy. There were some really great scenes in this book that gave me confidence that Marie James is coming into her own as a writer and I will definitely be looking out for her in the future. One scene in particular was fabulously done and very well imagined and still has me hot and bothered weeks after reading it (see the seduction in the art gallery…holy smokes!).

    There were some things that needed improvement to make the story stand out from the rest. The formality of the writing really hampered the flow of the story making it clunky at times. There were a handful of editing issues where words were missing and wrong words were used in inappropriate contexts, which always puts a wrench in my enjoyment because they make me stop and want to whip out a red pen to make corrections.

    The characters’ personalities and development needed some work. I found Lorali’s strong opinions on the stereotypical behaviors of a billionaire were off putting. She doesn’t even give him a chance and her lack of self esteem in his presence is never backed up by past experiences. With a little more backstory to explain her opinions and attitude, she would have been a more likable character. The plot also sadly fell a little flat for me. It was pretty anticlimactic and Lorali’s behavior was very cringe worthy in my opinion.

    The thing that the author really nailed, however, was the chemistry between Ian and Lorali. Their attraction was electric and their sex was “fan yourself while reading” hot. Though I could have done without the use of the word c*nt, who am I to say what Lorali’s character finds as appropriate dirty talk verbiage.

    Overall I’d say this book wasn’t bad. There is definitely room for improvement, but the bones of the story were there. I definitely found myself quickly turning pages to find out what happens next, which is always a great sign when reading a book let alone a debut novel.
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  • Reviewed in the United States on August 26, 2019
    This was a great billionaire romance! Ian and Lorali had such good chemistry. There needs to be more men like Ian. He fell head over heels for Lorali, and spoiled her in multiple ways. The only thing I would have changed would have been more background stories. I'm not saying there was too much Ian / Lorali time, I just think there could have been more involvement of other characters, like how Lorali was a reporter. I thought there would have been more involvement of that. Maybe some drama long with it. There were a lot of steamy scenes, and they were written really well! Definitely didn't leave out any of the dirty details! This was the start of what I'm sure is a great series that I look forward to reading more of!

Top reviews from other countries

  • Amazon Customer
    5.0 out of 5 stars 5 stars
    Reviewed in Canada on August 27, 2015
    This book was hot hot hot.. my husband would say so to because he surely got the best of it 😀 I reAlly enjoyed everything about this book ...just wow
  • Mich T
    5.0 out of 5 stars Hotter than hot
    Reviewed in Australia on September 22, 2015
    I absolutely loved this book! Makes you want to believe that fairytales really can come true. The characters are larger than life, and the storyline is easy to follow and sucks you in from the very first chapter. Cannot wait to read the next one!
  • CLAYR CATHERALL
    5.0 out of 5 stars 5 Stars!!
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on December 13, 2015
    Fantastic debut novel Marie James. I was hooked from the first page and couldn't stop till I finished the whole book.

    Lorali Bennet has had bad experiences with guys in the past and isn't looking for a relationship. When by chance, she runs into a handsome stranger. She can't seem to get this man out of her mind..

    Ian Hale is a sexy billionaire. With no interest in women or relationships. That is until he meets Lorali. He can't get her out of his thoughts. She even haunts his dreams...

    Can Lorali let go of her past and give into her feelings for Ian?
    Or will Ian's secret frighten her away ?

    Can't wait to read book 2
  • XD sanity
    4.0 out of 5 stars Definitely a slow burner
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on December 4, 2024
    This book was ok. But I didn't feel like I couldn't put it down like some books. It was a slow burner. It is a dual pov.
  • Jessica Martell
    5.0 out of 5 stars Sizzling HOT
    Reviewed in Canada on June 8, 2015
    An amazing sizzling HOT read. A MUST read. You will love Ian and Lorali. Can't wait til book two is out.

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